Hello, and welcome to the fourth Misenchanted Guestbook Archive, covering July through October of 2000!
Because the Guestbook itself gets unwieldy every so often I remove older posts, but I always save copies on my own machine first.
Three previous archives exist, covering the period from January through April, 2000, May through June 7, 2000, and the rest of June, 2000. A fifth archive will be added when I get around to it.
Because it's an archive and you can't add anything, I've reversed the sequence -- the oldest messages are at the top, and you can just read down. Nothing else here will be changed. I've kept the original color scheme and illo. (The font changed sometime between September 2000 and February 2001, but I'm not sure when; this archive uses the later font.)
-- Lawrence Watt-Evans
Illustration by Kiri Evans
The Spriggan Mirror: 37
The Wizard's Garden: 31
The Final Calling: 20
A Stranger in the Forest: 16
At the Sign of the Crimson Wolf: 15
The Rune of the Implacable Stalker: 12
The Vondish Ambassador: 9
Azraya of Ethshar: 7
A Slave of Wizardry: 5
A Feather from Her Wing: 3
other: 4
any idea who will be the translator for Dragon Weather and Dragon Society?
Is this something writers have a say about?
I don't know enough about German translators to know who's good and who isn't.
I didn't write anything today, though, because I was reading the new Harry Potter book.
Now I get to wait a year for #5!
Also, I feel like such a smuck...I have been working on my own FRPG for so long I finally got to read Dragon weather on Vacation over the Fourth of July and all I can say is....When does Dragon Society come out? That is an awesome book Lawrence. Will you autograph a copy of it for me if I send you one or can I buy an autographed copy of it off you?
As for THE DRAGON SOCIETY, my best guess is fall 2001 publication. It's more than half written now, but there's still a ways to go.
How many pages do you think Dragon Society will be?
If anyone knows where I can get the Lord of Dus series please let me know.
It'll be as long as it needs to be, Same for the third one, DRAGON VENOM.
(At times I've been unsure whether the entire series would be two, three, four, or even five books, but right now it looks like three.)
I'll keep an eye out for the check.
_The Nightmare People_ was not exactly difficult, but _uncomfortable_ to write -- if I intended to scare readers, then I had to scare myself.
_The Chromosomal Code_ was really tough, but I'm not sure why.
Easiest? I really don't know.
Anyway, there's a place called Rishna Gabidell. Where have I heard that name before? Or is this just a sort of Deja Vu?
And is it just me, or does "Tebas Tudan" sound a bit like "Tobas of Telven"?
Marcus
Anyway, Rishna Gabidell doesn't appear anywhere else that I know of, so it must just be deja vu.
And no, Tebas Tudan isn't intended to sound anything like Tobas of Telven, though I do see the similarity now that you mention it. Both names were derived according to the linguistic rules I'd set up for that culture, and it's just a coincidence that the Diknoi for "worthy pupil" came out sounding like an Ethsharitic name.
As examples: All Ethsharitic languages are Indo-European. Ethsharitic itself has about thirty distinct phonemes, conjugated verbs, only two cases -- a lot like English, except for having fewer phonemes. I didn't get more detailed or original because I don't _do_ much with it. It's got some resemblances to Sanskrit, some to English, some to Spanish, doesn't really fit in any existing language family; mostly uses open front vowels, only has two nasal consonants (N and M).
Domdur, on the other hand, while it's also Indo-European (I'm lazy), draws more on Russian and German sound-patterns and is heavily weighted toward voiced consonants and closed vowels. It has five nasal consonants, but I blurred the distinctions and transliterated them all as N, M, or NG. It's got three separate noun declensions; I'm not sure how many cases, but at least four. Again, I didn't bother working out a lot of vocabulary or grammatical details -- just enough to let me invent consistent names.
Diknoi is vaguely Greeklike, and a lot less detailed, since I didn't need it much. I don't know anything about its grammar, just what it sounds like.
Man's Tongue, from _Dragon Weather_, is equally skimpy, but it's got a lot of diphthongs and semivowels -- I think it's a little like Icelandic.
But yeah, it's good to see.
I don't like hardcovers. I buy maybe 40 or 50 books a year, and I
just don't have the space to store hardcover editions. Paperbacks
are just so much nicer to carry around, take to lunch, etc.
I gave up on Dragon Weather, though. I actually went to the library!
Man, I haven't been to a library in years. But I couldn't keep
reading all the comments here and not read Dragon Weather, so I
checked out the hardcover copy.
Amazon.com says Night of Madness is being released in hardcover.
I don't remember any other Ethshar novel having a hardcover release,
am I right?
It won't be the last, though -- _Ithanalin's Collection_ will be a hardcover, too, according to current plans.
There will be a paperback about a year after the hardcover.
Lawrence, With all the publishers out there, how do you settle on one? Do you shop them around for the best deals?
I'll be at the World Science Fiction Convention in Chicago in a few weeks, for those who want to meet me.
As for choosing a publisher, these days that's my agent's job, pretty much. Generally, though, at any given time it's usually pretty easy to see which is the best publisher in the SF/fantasy field. At the moment it's Tor; in the past it's been Del Rey, Bantam, Ballantine, or whoever. When I was trying to sell _The Lure of the Basilisk_, back in the late 1970s, Del Rey was THE place for fantasy, so that was where I tried first -- and they bought it.
If they hadn't, I'd have looked for the second-best, and worked my way down the list. In fact, I had another novel (later rewritten as _The Cyborg and the Sorcerers_) that _did_ work its way down through about four publishers (Ace, DAW, Del Rey, and I forget who else) before I gave up and put it aside.
Sometimes a particular publisher just looks like the best "fit" for a particular story -- if I were writing military SF, for example, I'd be sending stuff to Baen. Or sometimes an editor will specifically ask me to send something, which is how _Split Heirs_ wound up at Tor when I was still mostly writing for Del Rey. And there are auctions -- _The Nightmare People_ was auctioned, and NAL/Onyx was the high bidder.
Lawrence, do you ever publish stuff under a pen name, like as an experiment, as Dean Cain is said to do. Wacky question but hey I am wakcy.
And yeah, I've written under other names a few times, for various reasons. I'm not yet ready to admit _which_ names, though it's getting close.
(Yes, names plural.)
Of course, Lawrence Watt-Evans is a pseudonym in the first place, as is explained somewhere around here.
if not admitting the names, are you ready for admitting the reasons why you did it? At least some of them?
And regarding the hyphen in your name: It could be worse. Imagine Leutheusser-Schnarrenberger, Schalck-Golodkowski or Wieczorek-Zeul :-) All true German names, BTW.
Marcus
I was writing in a different genre than my usual, and didn't want it to show up in the sales records the chain bookstores look at when ordering the next title.
I sold more than one story to the same anthology, and therefore used a different name for one of them.
I was writing work-for-hire and didn't want to use my usual name on it.
Sometimes it's been one of these reasons, sometimes it's been two.
Anyway, I've been professionally published under at least four names, and non-professionally under at least three more. I may be forgetting some.
If anyone is interested, I have 'em over at http://www.angelfire.com/la/paw/adnd6.html in word97 format. Comments/criticism would be appreciated.
Translate? Oh yeah... the 12 circles vs the 9 spell levels. When I was making the spells, I figured Circle 2 was equivalent to Spell level 1, and circle 12 was beyond 9th spell level... and just made a sort of gradient in between.
Having a circle below the DnD 1st level helps alot, because I expect Wizards to have very basic spells for 'everyday' magic, and DnD 1st level is too powerful for that.
If you're not going to go public, I won't try to do it for you. However, I asked you about one once (providing the last name as Butler, rather than the correct one).
To keep the questions generic:
- When writing licensed characters, does the work usually end up being work-for-hire plain and simple?
- I assume that writing a licensed character significantly affects your income on the book. However, my assumption has been that, if you wrote a Star Wars book (e.g.) you would get a lesser cut of the royalties, as Lucasfilms would get a chunk, but that the combination of playing with characters you might have a fondness for, plus the possibility that the big "STAR WARS" on the cover would sell more copies than your name without the "STAR WARS" combined to compensate for the lesser royalty amount.
If that is so, then revealing that you're really "Jack Sprat", writer of STAR WARS: THE UMPTEENTH BATTLE AGAINST THE REMAINS OF THE EMPIRE could mean that people who would usually ignore that book but are fans of yours would buy it. However, if you got a flat fee for working on a licensed character, then you don't care if it sells 1 copy or 1 billion (except, perhaps, a sense of professional pride.
How does writing a licensed character work, then?
The SFWA Webring was run on a special webring server, using software owned by an outfit whose exact name I'm not sure of, to be honest, and _that's_ what Yahoo! bought. It wasn't SFF-Net; the webring was contracted out, and Yahoo! bought the contractor. So I'm still on SFF-Net, SFWA is still on SFF-Net, but I've dropped out of the Webring. In order to stay on the webring I'd need to get a Yahoo! ID and agree to terms of service that are unconscionably broad and vague.
If they get the legalities straightened out I might rejoin eventually, but I'm not sure.
By the way, I have the capability of removing duplicate posts; I hope no one minds if I do that.
As for writing licensed material, the exact deal varies, but a typical situation would be Star Trek. For a normal paperback, the author will get 6% to 10% of the cover price in royalties, depending on contract terms. For a Trek novel, the author gets 2.5% royalties, but for most folks the number of copies sold will be much higher, so it works out to be good money. Other properties might be more or less, both for the initial advance and the royalty rate.
It is legally work-for-hire, but there are almost always royalties anyway, because publishers have found they get better work that way.
(And yes, I've done licensed novels, but not Star Wars.)
That's a nice way to seperate the two styles of webpage. I am amused by the 'Web Relics' spot down on the bottom of the left frame. How much webspace do you get through sff.net to put up this stuff?
How is the poll coming?
TSR (Wizards of the Coast) apparently decided that a 0th spell level is useful and included it in their long awaited 3rd edition of the ADnD rules set. And to think that Mr. Evans had it right the entire time.
=)
I really should update the poll results, but I've been concentrating on other stuff -- like THE DRAGON SOCIETY. I've decided that THE SPRIGGAN MIRROR will be next after ITHANALIN'S COLLECTION -- back in July I worked out the plot details I needed, and a proposal has just gone off to Tor.
But I'm still interested in what's next after that...
Plus another great book to look forward to. :-)
On the other hand, Ethshar works well for short stories. You know what
would be neat? A collection of Ethshar short stories. You take the five
or six stories out there (I don't know if you have the rights to reprint
them, though), add in some more new stories, and Presto! The Ethshar Anthology.
I'd buy it. In paperback :)
As for a collection of the short stories, I do have the rights to all of the seven -- sort of; there's one that I have limited rights to. However, that's only half a book, and I'm just not interested in filling out the other half with new stories right now.
I'm considering other possibilities, though.
Then again, I don't have all the books either; so I shouldn't cry out so loud :-)
Wher did I hear that the novels get reprinted in hardcover?
Marcus
Anyway, my agent was negotiating with Tor about possible reprints, maybe in hardcover. Unfortunately, it appears that won't happen, so once I get _The Dragon Society_ done and can spare the time, I'll be talking to a couple of print-on-demand publishers. This would, I hope, be a temporary solution until Tor changes its collective mind.
I expect that any reprints will include short stories in the back, as bonuses.
(and please forgive any speeling/transcription mistakes)
ESCAPE
by walren vanse
we know that further war is madness
we know, where war before meant sadness
war will now mean real extinction
so we leave behind our guns
safe we sail from fading coastlines
free away from hate and war
sailing carefee on the ocean
not returning any more
we tried to tell the world to stop
the madness, before everybody drops
but they wouldn't listen to us
told us, "oh, don't make a fuss"
now we leave them to their fate
sail away on wooden clippers
and escape in silver starships
to Orion and the Dipper
then when we were gone away
as we feared, there came a day
of judgement, which all Earth condemned
to a bright and bloody end
safe we sail from glowing ruins
free away from death and war
soaring free, through stars and oceans
we aren't returning any more.
------
I hope he keeps writing!
Did I write that? I don't remember it.
Hi! That poem was published in Entropy Vol 1 No 1. EVERYTHING in that first issue was written by you, and when it came out in January of 1972 I thought it was the coolest thing since Guttenberg.
I loved the poem -- it amazed me that someone could be clever enough to rhyme clippers with Dipper -- I especially loved the fact that you appendend the following to the bottom of it:
copyright 1971 by Wolery Music
from "Lyryk for the Dark Musyk"
used by permission of the author.
Don't forget, I was seventeen too! Forgive me if I was easily impressed. I offered right away to join the staff!
Most impressive about you was your willingness to publish a review of your own poem in the second editon of the publication....
This effort, which I refust to dignify with the term poem, is a perfect example of the stunning ineptitude of the "Now Generations"'s literary efforts. The imbecilic lack of imagination on the part of the author is betrayed by his(her) stultifying imagery, with which he(she) attains a pinnacle of mediocrity....
It goes on, and gets more vitriolic. You are lambasted for 'culpable stupidity' and 'venal ignorance of life and the nature of man'. (I thought it was bad enough that you'd been assigned to the "Now Generation")
So you impressed me doubly when you were seventeen. Once for writing a poem and the second time for troubling yourself to publish a scathing review which you somehow managed to endure by holding to the fiction that Walren was your dim witted house guest.
I posted it with the hope that those teenage fans of yours who aspire to be writers themselves will be encouraged to realize that writing gets better with time -- and to keep trying!
Paul Bradford (aging hipster)
You were easily impressed. I mean, I think I did some decent stuff in ENTROPY, but I wouldn't have cited any of the poetry as examples.
=(
I love the idea of short stories in the backs of reprints of your old books. That's a great idea! If you re-release em, I'd buy copies just to have spares around, especially with bonus short stories. I think I am missing two of your Ethshar short stories because the books they were published in are out of print. Srinita's Dragon and Portrait of a Hero. If you could publish either of those in conjunction with a reprint of your Ethshar books, I would be happy indeed!
I have read about that hyphen before, but must've overlooked the "hassle" comment. What sort of hassle can be generated by that?
The hyphen confuses people -- they don't know whether to alphabetize me under W or E, sometimes I get listed as Lawrence-Watt Evans, etc. And for that matter, being listed under E would have meant better shelf position.
The confusion has gotten less over time, though, because more Americans have hyphenated names now than when I started, twenty years ago.
Regarding the short stories, the current plan is for Wildside Press editions of the Ethshar novels, which would indeed include the short stories. This isn't definite yet, and will probably be delayed because Wildside's publisher, John Betancourt, just broke his arm and won't be able to handle anything new for six weeks or so.
When and if they do appear, though,"Portrait of A Hero" would accompany _Blood of A Dragon_. Unfortunately, "Sirinita's Dragon" is the one short story that doesn't yet have a place assigned. It may well wind up in the back of _Ithanalin's Collection_, but I'm not sure.
I can't wait for the Night of madness.....
Hey lawrence,
How is Dragon Society coming?
Chris,
I am still waiting on my T and the books. Do you still plan on sending them?
Thanks,
Andy
Once it's done I intend to get a little more serious about fixing up the webpage, but right now I don't have time. I'm glad you like the new versions.
And yes, I keep it fairly plain so as to go easy on people with slow connections or old browsers who haven't yet found the no-frills version.
Hope you guys like it.
Hey Lawrence,
There is part of you page in the Dragon Society that says it's not under contract. Is this correct? I thought you had sold it to Tor.
Just curious,
Later,
Andy
(I'm not sure just which draft this _is_, though -- parts of it are only second, but other chapters are now fifth-draft...)
If they are print outs what do you do with them?
Later,
Andy
I do, however, save the complete first draft to diskette before I start revising.
I also don't keep it all in one file -- I originally did this because I was using a primitive computer that couldn't handle large files, but I decided I liked it and kept it up.
Ordinarily I have four chapters in each file. This makes it fairly easy to manipulate -- I can flip back and forth between windows.
I didn't get one this time. I don't know why not. I've been bitching occasionally at my editor about it; the first time she said she had no idea what went wrong, and she hasn't answered the last couple. (I think she may be in Texas for the World Fantasy Con.)
I am not happy about this.
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